I hate this picture so much. The proportioning is way off and I didn't spend nearly enough time on it as I should have. I think I'll go back and edit it later, but in the meantime, here it is. I just needed to get it done.
It's for an art trade with She drew me my beloved Sasuke, so it's worth it all. It's a big file, maybe I'll shrink it. I went kind of crazy with the background though. ^^
The lighting in this came out REALLY well. It looks like a searchlight has just caught her in the middle of some nefarious activity. XD Don't worry so much about the proportions--they're still waaay better than in the original sketch. One criticism; you have a lot of very light tones highlighting her hair, clothing, and and leg, but I don't see any in her face. I think it's great that you have dark shadows on her face, and I think they'd pop more if there was a little bit of light in her face for them to contrast with. Just my little bit of advice; you don't have to change anything you don't want to change. Overall, I think this is a very cool and dramatic piece.
8D I like the shiny in the blade, and the devious look she(?) has... critique? I dunno if the back of the jacket would wrinkle that way, and her knee is pointy (though that may be stylistic). I do like that you try different angles and don't get stuck in the same poses/views over and over again 8D it's creative.
Oh yeah...the background...is hawt. 8D
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Don't worry so much about the proportions--they're still waaay better than in the original sketch.
One criticism; you have a lot of very light tones highlighting her hair, clothing, and and leg, but I don't see any in her face. I think it's great that you have dark shadows on her face, and I think they'd pop more if there was a little bit of light in her face for them to contrast with. Just my little bit of advice; you don't have to change anything you don't want to change.
Overall, I think this is a very cool and dramatic piece.
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sensitive and caring are the true source power
... do u dare? pick one...
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Oh yeah...the background...is hawt. 8D
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"They call me...the Love Hammer."
"Why do they call you a hammer?"
"Because I like to POUND things."
8D
THE CREEPINESS AND EVIL OF BLACK BLOOD MAKA!!!!!!!
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Hardcore girl gamer and proud of it!
Animes/manga on to watch/read list
Digimon
D Gray Man
666 Satan
Gurren Lagan
Evangelion
Cowboy Bebop
Trigun
Samurai Champloo
Fist of the North Star
Ergo Proxy
I am glad you enjoy it. ^^
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And this was scarcely odd because they'd eaten every one...
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And this was scarcely odd because they'd eaten every one...
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